Thursday, March 20, 2008

I've been reading too much Kerouac, I think.

A Story A Poem
i's all one or the other
(or both)
LIFE
a story of poems
a mess of lines
a song

rhythm n beat
n blues
sucrose pop
operatic tragedy

child’s ditty


DAMNIT. Okay, there's more to it than that.
But Blogger won't let me keep my original spacing.
It's so much better the way I spaced it.
Bastards.
And I don't quite like the beat.
But I hate revision / editing.
Final drafts usually = first drafts.
Well, it's something. I guess.
Well, it's partly something, plus a lot of stolen somethings.
Hahaha.
YES. Livejournal lets me space it properly.
"Well played livejournal," as Tracy would say. Hehe.
Okay. Good night.

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